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George,
I have done some manuscript editing, can you tell me more about what you’re looking for? micafilms@btinternet.comStuart,
I’m very interested in your post. I have plenty of material available and I’m happy with the arrangement as outlined. Stylistically my material runs from sophisticated pop through rock to the borderlands of folk, blues, etc… If you like I can send a bunch of lyrics on a no obligation basis. Let me know if there are specific styles you’re interested in, or, conversely, any styles you’re not partial to.
I am also a filmmaker with a site at http://www.micafilms.co.uk.
Best wishes,
Mike Hallett
micafilms@btinternet.com
DUST MUST FALL
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Sunlight falls
Through the attic window
Onto dust laid in our pattern
On a weathered parquet floor
The light catches
On a pair of old ballet shoes
One with its heel half-broken
Kind of says it all
You and I
Twisted in that sunlight
We tried too hard to shape ourselves
Like two stars up in the lights
There was a grace
To our loving, laughing, touching
But the final curtain came
As surely as the night
Dust must fall
We were no exception
For all our flesh and blood and bone
We’re just grist to time’s grey mill
There were moments
When we shimmered like sunlit silver
Our sweet little victories
When we made time stand still
(c) Mike Hallett 2006Jennifer,
You can find format advice, links to existing scripts and software (free and paid) at http://breakingin.net/format_tutorial.htm
I’m happy to take a look at your scripts and give feedback if you still need it.
